ext_17819 ([identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fan_elune 2007-11-22 02:48 pm (UTC)

The way he remembers each of them is actually leeched right out of the novel, for the record. Let's all bow to Gatiss together. I built the whole fic around the way Gatiss had Lucifer remember that night - he had something to say about all of them, how he remembered them, but then all he could say about Charlie was that he was always good for a gasper. I think that broke me more than anything when I read it.

Thank you so much for the feedback, anyway! I'm gonna stop dissecting those paragraphs now. *grins*

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