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Nate Elune ([personal profile] fan_elune) wrote2006-12-19 08:16 am

Torchwood Fic: The Loudest Voice (Jack/Ianto)

Title: The Loudest Voice
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Ianto/Jack
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Until Torchwood 1x10, Out Of Time
Summary: There are times when silence has the loudest voice.
Disclaimer: they're entirely and completely RTD's, and the Beeb's. Although I wouldn't mind getting custody of them, say, every other weekend?
Author's Notes: You'll need to have seen Out Of Time and read the following IM transcript. I... couldn't leave them there after tonight's episode. Unbeta'ed, so any mistakes are my own.
Edit: So it appears that I've been lied to (by the internet, how dare it!) and that Ianto is in fact a bit taller than Jack. The fic has been tweaked accordingly. Thanks to everybody who let me know!


The loudest voice

He's not sure if Jack cuts the offsite communication off, or he does. But then he blinks and he's been staring at the computer screen for five minutes and a dozen seconds, approximately, a look at the time informs him, and he blinks again. There's a vague lurch to his stomach. It reminds him of times long gone when death didn't use to be what he covered up for a living. Day in, day out, and now on the driver seat of his car.

He's wondering whether he wants to order a new one in a different colour, or the exact same one, or another one altogether. He knows all he needs to do to get blood stains out, he's the best valet service around town as far as gory murders go, but he's not sure what to do about a clean suicide.

He wonders if that isn't an oxymoron.

Jack must be back by now, he knows, another glance at the time and it's been three hours and fourteen minutes. How time flies by. You might want to - and there was that pause, that silence that seemed too heavy for Jack - get the car valet serviced. No need for Ianto's clean-up services, let the regular police handle it, Jack would flash them his badge and they wouldn't ask any more questions about what Ianto had to do with John.

John's dead.

Exhaust fumes.

I'm sorry.

I'm really sorry about your car.


He shouldn't care.

I was too late for him.

Ianto pushes up to his feet. His legs feel surprisingly wobbly. He sees Lisa's face in his mind, the way she used to be, before the Cybermen, when she was human, alive, laughing. Real, and herself. He leans a hand on the doorframe as he steps through it, the beads of the curtain trapped between flesh and wood for a heartbeat, then lets his steps lead him to the heart of Torchwood.

There is no light in Jack's office. His feet lead him there all the same, and he leans his forehead against the glass pane, eyes closed, hands in his pockets.

"Merry bloody Christmas," he whispers, breath wafting steam onto the glass.

Slides his hands out of his pockets, spreads fingertips on the glass, pushes away slowly to relearn how to stand without the support. Opens his eyes, freezes when he sees Jack halfway out of the manhole in his office, stares back at the blue eyes that blink and glance away as the man finishes to pull himself up.

The urge to turn on his heel and walk away is strong, but he opens the door instead, stands on the threshold, and watches Jack without a word. He wants to ask if he's alright, what's happened, and - he feels vaguely disgusted with himself about this one - what about his car. Instead he stands there and lets Jack come to stand a few inches away from him, manages to hold the icy gaze. Oh, how warm that blue can spark, but not today.

It is early Christmas morning, and Jack's eyes look dead.

"What -" is all Ianto has time to say before a barely perceptible shake of Jack's head shushes him.

"Don't you have anywhere to be." There's no life in Jack's voice to intone the sentence like a proper question, but he does raise his eyebrows in his usual manner.

The words cut deep inside Ianto. He doesn't have anybody anymore, does he, Jack, and memories of things that were and wishes that were never fulfilled rise to choke his throat. It's hard to swallow, as if the cut has been made to his throat and the wound was now sensitive and liable to reopen at the slightest pressure. They're always so happy to find him at the ready at all times, he thinks bitterly, and finds that he holds no less resentment than he used to, perhaps even more.

"Don't you," he points out in return, voice more controlled than he feels, sounding almost his natural self.

"Get yourself somewhere to be, Ianto," Jack says, and turns away to go drop in his chair, lines of tension and worry and age on his handsome face. "Get yourself a life."

Instead of complying Ianto walks into the office, letting the door shut behind him, and shrugs out of his jacket.

"I'm not in the mood," Jack says with a frown, watching Ianto fold the jacket carefully, deposit it on the edge of his desk.

"Shut up," Ianto snaps, and finds that he means it. He supposes he must look as angry as he feels, because Jack's face shows surprise, and that's an improvement on the lifelessness, he thinks, except anger is still coursing through his veins and he finds that he, yes, he can't shut up, and the waistcoat joins the jacket, and he loosens his tie. "Shut up, Jack, for once, for the love of all that is not yet corrupt in this world, please shut up if you're not going to say anything." Because that's all Jack ever does, isn't it, say pretty words, snarky one-liners and cryptic almost-riddles, and Ianto's heard enough, tie gone and shirt unbuttoned halfway down. "Just shut up."

Jack blinks at him, and seems shocked into silence, and Ianto shouldn't be feeling such wonderful smugness over it. It feels out of place, and wrong, but sweet, and good, and he wants to feel that more, except he wants to feel Jack's naked skin more than that right now. He tears off his shirt, lets it drop to the floor and strides around Jack's desk. The man turns his chair to be facing Ianto, who drops to his knees between his legs and pulls him down into a kiss Jack doesn't resist.

Jack's always in the mood, tongues sliding together, stroking, dancing, fighting, the smell of exhaust fumes something that's ignored and possibly all in Ianto's mind, his fingers threading through Jack's short hair, gripping, clenching, tugging, and there are teeth, too, and silence all around them, but for the ticking of a clock on the wall. Counting down 'til the end of this, and Ianto doesn't know when it will stop, only knows with fire strong certainty that he will not be satisfied until he has made Jack cry out and writhe and moan in pleasure, until the smell of the exhaust fumes is gone.

So many, many clothes, but Ianto knows his way around them so well. It's never been quite the same as undressing himself, undressing another man, but he's learned to undress Jack. Jacket, waistcoat, braces, shirt, undershirt, and why must Jack wear so many layers, what is he afraid people might see if he didn't, a thought dismissed as soon as it is born by the sharp exhale of Jack's breath at the teeth Ianto clamps down on his naked shoulder, trapezoid muscle and the fumes taste metallic under his tongue. He knows it'll mark but it's a place normally hidden under Jack's clothes and he likes to think that he has left his mark, no matter what, for a few days in Jack's flesh.

"Ianto," Jack murmurs breathlessly against his ear, and there's that thrill shooting up Ianto's spine, as always with the first true touch of Jack's hands, pressing him close as if the skin between them was too much.

"Jack," Ianto replies, but his tone sounds quite self-assured, and he's pushing back up to his feet, steady now, hands on Jack's waistband pulling him up after him. "Shut up," he mutters between one kiss and the other, and they stumble together.

It's not easy to keep the lead when Jack is being Jack, and forceful, and overwhelming, except this Jack does fall silent and it helps, hands tugging at belts, shoes kicked off, trousers and underwear stepped out of and this Jack lets Ianto push him against the wall with a low moan, and pushes back against him, all strong muscles and wide lines. Jack is so much, and Ianto just rubs himself against him for a few ticks of that clock, a few ticks of that clock and a few shorter breaths.

"First drawer," Jack says, as if he needed to. Ianto knows.

Lube squeezed out on his hand and Ianto's fingers are pushing inside Jack, one and then immediately a second, Jack's arms spread wide on the wall, fingers splayed and palms flat, muscles underlined by each undulation of Jack's body under Ianto's touch.

"Make me feel alive again," Jack murmurs, and Ianto realises he doesn't need to tell him to shut up again, because this time Jack is saying something, a truth or a request, doesn't matter what, it's something, and he pulls his fingers out of him, leans his forehead against Jack's nape as he lubes himself up, twitching from his own touch and how much he wants, needs, needs this ought to frighten him but Jack. Jack. Jack.

No need for a condom, Ianto trusted Jack when he told him that the first time, ignored his subsequent quip about male pregnancy, feeling quite safe from that, and they've never used one, never known the awkwardness of rubber between them. Ianto pushes in and it's only him and Jack, so hot and tight around him and he remembers to breathe with a gasp when Jack clenches tighter around him, words tumbling off those ever restless lips of his and he's back to not saying anything. "Shut up," growled against his ear and Jack does, Ianto almost hears him swallow it all back down.

They've had slow shags, they've had playful shags, they've had rough shags, but this is their first raw shag.

It's raw in its silence, the ticking clock mixing with their ragged breaths, but the quiet of the empty office creeps in on them with each thrust. It's raw in the snap of Ianto's hips, not a build-up but sharp and strong from the get-go and each one feeds the brutality of the next with how brilliant it feels. It's raw in the way that when Ianto stretches his arms out alongside Jack's he can't quite reach his hands as he meant to, can't cover his fingers with his, and curls them around his wrists instead, gripping tight, and it speaks of every way Ianto can't quite be it, whatever 'it' is.

It's raw in many more ways beside, not the least of which are the cries Ianto finds himself shoving out of Jack with each thrust after he shifts angle, and Jack twists one of his wrists free of Ianto's grasp to slide his powerful arm over his, brings it down and wraps Ianto's hand around his cock, fingers threaded together and that, too, is raw, the way they jerk him off in time with the sharp bucks of Ianto's hips. So are the orgasms that quickly overpower them, Ianto's forehead leaning against the bite mark he left earlier as he groans low against Jack's skin, counterpoint to the man's loud cry, his hand and Jack's clenching convulsively around his cock as it spills, too, onto the wall and Ianto's cleaned too many semen stains in Jack's office to give a toss, manner of speaking.

The way they breathe in the silence after the tumult is perhaps even rawer. Ianto's not sure which way is up, or less figuratively, not sure when his legs are going to give out, but he knows it's going to be soon. He's considering moving, for the sake of dropping somewhere before toppling down to the floor robs him of any dignity, when Jack's arm reaches back and wraps around his waist, holding him there, close, inside of him.

"Jack," he murmurs, breathless.

"Ianto," Jack replies, and he sounds much more confident.

The silence after that is less raw. It is, perhaps, full of maybes. Jack's only support by now is his brow against the wall, and he brings their linked hands up to his mouth to lick at what sperm he can find there, and little by little the arm he has around Ianto's waist loosens its hold.

"Shower," Ianto suggests after a longer while.

"Mmm," is Jack's only answer at first, but then he lets his arm slip from around Ianto's waist altogether, and so Ianto withdraws, stomach muscles jumping with the gasp of the sudden loss.

Jack turns around, back against the wall now, and pulls Ianto into a kiss, intimate and warm, his arms wrapping around Ianto's shoulders and bringing him close, sweat slick skin sliding and Ianto sags against him and into the kiss. He isn't sure which of the kiss, or Jack, says thank you, but it doesn't matter, the thanks are still there, and for now he can take them, meet them with his tongue and lips, if not with his own.

"Mmm," Jack says again. "I'll still feel you by tomorrow."

"Jack," Ianto cuts in with a frown, because he's doing it again, saying nothing with words.

Jack blinks, looking almost slapped by the scold, and brushes knuckles down the side of Ianto's face. "I'm sorry about your car."

Ianto can't help but chuckle mirthlessly at that. "Yeah." He wants to ask, again, but doesn't, simply forces himself to pull away from Jack's warm body and tug on his hand. "Shower," he repeats, and this time Jack follows.

He stands in the shower and lets the spray fall down on him, merciful rain that streaks warm trails of wet over him. He tilts his head back, lets his hair be washed back from his forehead. It's a few more seconds before he realises that Jack hasn't joined him, and he looks back over at him with raised eyebrows to find him staring thoughtfully.

"I never questioned…" Jack starts, tone a little awed, or hesitant, or something utterly unlike Jack, but then seems to think better of it and joins Ianto in the shower, remains silent for a while longer. When he opens his mouth again, Ianto knows better than to wonder if what he's about to tell him is what he originally meant to say. Wondering gets you nowhere with Jack. "It's Christmas."

Ianto allows himself a small, wry smile as he grabs the soap and lathers his hands up. "You noticed."

"I'll buy you a new car," Jack assures him, quite seriously.

This time an actual chuckle breaks past Ianto's lips, but it doesn't sound quite right, even as he tries to infuse his words with it. "Will you shut up about the bloody car." He turns to Jack and steps into his space, slides his soapy hands over his ass. Somebody needs to be cleaned, and that's what Ianto is best at, isn't it.

He's surprised when Jack simply wraps his arms around him and holds on while he does just that, even more so when Jack leans his temple against Ianto's and remains utterly silent.

"Sometimes I wish you told me about you," Ianto can't help but say, as he pulls back enough to get a good look at Jack's face, and all the mysteries hidden behind the clear eyes. "Most times I'm thankful you don't."

Jack smiles. "Then most times you're a wise man, Ianto Jones."

They rinse off, and dry off, and curl up on what Jack insists on calling a bed, still naked, and it's early Christmas morning and neither of them feels much like it. Ianto's spooning Jack, and he noses at the edge of the bite mark. Under the strong scent of soap, he can still detect traces of exhaust.

So he licks at the bite, and feels Jack shift against him, and wonders if he can get used to the exhaust.
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[identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 08:36 am (UTC)(link)
This is gorgeous. I love the way you write Ianto's reactions to Jack, the push and pull of their relationship, the casualness and the caring. Marvellous writing, and a most enjoyable read. :)

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so glad I'm not the only one who can see the "push and pull," as you say, between them to be the way they work. Thanks a lot.

[identity profile] subtly-modded.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 09:00 am (UTC)(link)
wow. this was a great surprise end to my evening. thank you! such a great exchange.

there are a couple of typos at the beginning, other than that this is just amazing.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad I could make your evening better! Thanks a lot for taking the time to feedback.

(Care to point out those typos if you can remember where they are?)

[identity profile] crystalshard.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 09:50 am (UTC)(link)
I liked this. The emotional pain and the physical relief between them nicely counterpoint each other.

Couple of translations-to-British:
vest - waistcoat
suspenders - braces

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you for those! Now corrected. I suck for not catching them myself.

And thanks for the feedback, too. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[identity profile] seewhoiam.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 10:49 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww.
That was brilliant.
This should def have happened in the last episode hehe.
Jack needs to get some love, and Ianto too :P

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh. Well much as I adore RTD, I'm not sure he'll ever go as far as to give us smut on screen. Not in TW, mind. So fanfic it must be. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for letting me know!
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[personal profile] lonelybrit 2006-12-19 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
Oooohhh, loved this :) Got both their voices spot on, as well as the slight f**ked-upness of the whole relationship. Theirs isn't particularly straightforward, but it is needed at times. And loved how it was Ianto who took the lead, again. Poor Jack needed a bit of human contact after that whole episode. Great stuff - bravo!

And yes, just seconding the translation of suspenders to braces, because the former does leave one with a very interesting mental image! ;)

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
*facepalms* Yes, I changed those to braces. I'm now completely picturing Jack in British suspenders. Anyway! Thank you. I'm glad you think I got their voices right, I was quite worried about that, and yes, I have a thing for fucked-upness, so I'm unlikely to ever make it any less so than it ought to be. Thanks a lot for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] farosdaughter.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 11:34 am (UTC)(link)
Sigh. So lovely.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] notevery.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 12:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that was superb. I really, really enjoyed it. You write beautifully, have a gift for delicately and concisely evoking the most complex of emotions. This is probably the single best fic I've read, in my mind, at grasping the complexity and the subtlety of these two's relationship.

Loved it!

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow. Thanks. I'm not even sure what to say to that, apart from, thanks a lot, and I'm so glad you liked it that much. Thank you!

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[identity profile] druis.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 12:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Very well done. The voices are perfect, the sex is hot, and you've managed to make it melancholy without being depressing.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Sounds like I pulled off everything I wanted to. :) Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely story. I'm glad Jack got what he needed after that episode.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, I couldn't but write it. I just watched that and was so thrown by JB's performance, the look on Jack's face... and then I read the IM transcript and I just had to. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks a lot for the feedback.
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[identity profile] tonko-ni.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 02:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Yesss, aftermath fic! Really somber and sad and hot, and I love the atmosphere (and the the really shallow part of me loved Ianto on top. ::cough::) and Ianto making Jack stop with the babbling cover-up he keeps pulling.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahaha there's nothing wrong iwth a bit of shallowness. Ianto makes a very good top. Anyway! I'm glad that I seemed to nail everything I wanted to - somber and sad and hot - and yes, Jack speaks a lot, but there are times when Ianto can't take it. Won't take it. Thanks a lot for the feedback.

[identity profile] cosmic.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 03:36 pm (UTC)(link)
This is sad and powerful and gorgeous.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Truly. Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback.

[identity profile] rhea-carlysse.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 04:39 pm (UTC)(link)
God, this was brilliant. So, so brilliant. I guess last episode really put us all in hurt/confort mode (even I, who have lots of other things to do and should remember that) started a fic.

"Sometimes I wish you told me about you," Ianto can't help but say, as he pulls back enough to get a good look at Jack's face, and all the mysteries hidden behind the clear eyes. "Most times I'm thankful you don't."

Jack smiles. "Then most times you're a wise man, Ianto Jones."


I love that bit ^^

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I bet I wasn't the only one left with the must-fic urge. I sort of stayed up all night writing it, so yes, lots of other things to do like sleeping. Woops?

Thanks a lot. For the feedback, and taking the time to leave it. :)

And I love your icon.

[identity profile] saighin.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 05:30 pm (UTC)(link)
and it speaks of every way Ianto can't quite be it, whatever 'it' is.

Something about this line nearly brought me to tears...

Breath-takingly beautiful story...

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. There's no better feedback than knowing tears were involved in the reading, and that makes me sound quite sadistic, doesn't it, so I'll just go back to "thank you" and stop there. Thank you.

[identity profile] eandh99.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 06:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Liked this soo much (even though, as a teeny tiny nitpick, I think Gareth David-Lloyd might be a smidge taller, but they certainly shoot the show to make Ianto look a little shorter than Jack) Espcially the bit about not being it, whatever it is, and as a reader and a DW-watcher the extra sadness of knowing that Jack can never really find "it" again, because Nine and Rose are both gone beyond recall.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I actually looked it up when I wrote it because I didn't want to get it wrong, and apparently Gareth's 5'10, and John 6, so. That said, do I really want to trust the internet on this? Ah, whatever, it's fanfiction, and the way they shoot them. :p

Anyway! Thanks a lot for the feedback, and oh so yes on the Nine-and-Rose being gone thing. I do love the tragedy of Jack's character.

[identity profile] sarkastic.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 07:32 pm (UTC)(link)
This is so beautifully written and the best portrayal of Jack and Ianto's relationship that I've read yet. You wrote both of them perfectly. Really, I can't do it justice with feedback.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 08:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this means so much, especially coming from you. Thank you so, so much for the feedback, honey. Thank you.

[identity profile] littlegothsin.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I've got to review this, but I'm bad at that, so I'll just say I like it a lot. Good job!

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. See how it answers some of the stuff you mentioned in your post?

[identity profile] buzzylittleb.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
"and Ianto's cleaned too many semen stains in Jack's office to give a toss, manner of speaking."

That is pure genius. *is happy*

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
Heh! I couldn't resist. I'm glad to've made you happy.

[identity profile] elethoniel.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Firstly: Thank you for having Ianto top! I have devoured all the Jack/Ianto fics I have been able find these past few days and this is the first to have Jack as a bottom. It's awesome. XD

Secondly: Wow. I love your characterisation of Jack. It's perfect considering what he has just been through. Ianto reacted in just the way Jack needed. Absolutely brilliant. ♥

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
You know, I'm not that surprised, although I'm pretty saddened by it. (I haven't actually read many of those at all.) But I really don't see Jack as someone who needs to top all the time. He's far too at ease with his sexuality for that. I could rant more about topping and bottoming but I'll stop while I'm ahead. :p

Thanks! A lot. Those two boys wouldn't leave my mind alone after I watched the episode. I'm glad you found the characterisation good, too. Thanks for the feedback. :)

[identity profile] red-estelle.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
oh grin. love take charge ianto, you write him so well. thumbs up!

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 12:26 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot! I was rather worried about writing him, seeing as it's my first TW piece. Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback. :)

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/nixxie_/ 2006-12-20 01:35 am (UTC)(link)
Gorgeous!

Pity that Ianto is actually taller than Jack... by an inch or two, I believe.

The descriptions of him being shorter and smaller framed jarred me off a bit. Other than that very well visualised.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 09:43 am (UTC)(link)
See, I actually looked that up! 'Cause I wanted to make sure. I will never trust the internet again. Hmpf. I'm all put out by that now. Anyway, thank you for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it despite that.

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[identity profile] magickaldreamer.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 02:46 am (UTC)(link)
Fuck yes. Top!Ianto is such a huge turn-on, and especially when he's (well, they both are) THIS in character. And dude, wall!sex. HOT.

However, one thing that bugged me is that Ianto is slightly taller (or at least as tall as) Jack. Just thought I'd let you know.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 09:44 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Thank you for letting me know.

This is me, never again trusting the internet when I look up actors' heights. Seriously!

[identity profile] looking4tarzan.livejournal.com 2006-12-22 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow I loved this, I've been trying in my head how Ianto would be more dominant over Jack, and you've made it work, and made it work wonderfully.

and Jack wanting to buy him the car *grin*

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-25 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Thank you. I didn't set out to make it so, it just... wrote itself that way.

I figured Jack totally would. Heh.

Thanks a lot for the feedback.

[identity profile] zabbers.livejournal.com 2006-12-23 09:59 am (UTC)(link)
oh I'm so happy to have found this! thank you.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2006-12-25 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
You're very welcome, it was a pleasure to write. Your icon is making me giggle like mad. Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback.

[identity profile] kephisos.livejournal.com 2006-12-26 07:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, hot. That's hot. Very well written, and hot. Yes.

I love Ianto's attitude, and it's nice to see him being the authoritative one instead of Jack for a change.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2007-01-02 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for taking the time to leave feedback! It's nice to know people enjoy reading this as much as I did writing it.

[identity profile] centaurea-m.livejournal.com 2006-12-27 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
aaaagh. This. THis is why Ianto/Jack is fascinating and hot and why it *works* in such a twisted way. the dynamics, as others have mentioned, are perfect. as is: Ianto telling Jack to shut up; the inadequacy, not being 'it', whatever 'it' is; the distinctions between Jack saying things and not saying things with words; the clock; and so many descriptions that I can't repeat them all. so so so so good.

[identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com 2007-01-02 03:01 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. A lot. I'm so glad to know that I managed to convey it all. The two of them fascinate me in so many ways, and it's good to know that it resonates with other persons, too. Thank you, a lot, for taking the time to leave this feedback. It's definitely appreciated.

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